Monday, February 19, 2007

I Am From Snow

Via Buffy I stumbled upon this writing exercise based on a poem by George Ella Lyons. Here is my take:
Where I'm From
I am from snow,
from Vaseline and mittens.
I am from the block atop the shopping mall.
Slanting middle balcony,
parking garage full of fumes.
I am from the white-stemmed birches,
the dark spruce trees
and rosy cheeks.

I am from blue eyes
and thick glasses,
from His Life, Landsverk and Blackvalley.
I am from the sobber-out-loud
and the having to lay down.
From shoulders back and please help.
I am from hallelujah and lifted hands high,
and coloring between pews
singing songs of glory.

I’m from Stovner and Strålesund,
cold milk and moose meat.
From the voyage my father made
and the scars of my mother
and fola, fola Blakken.
I’m from a barnfull of generations past
and hayloft with half-century hay for jumping
and finding shoe-lasts long forgotten.
Shod with scraps of memories
I am from a new beginning.

16 comments:

Buffy said...

Love it. It's amazing what we can come out with when we're not even trying....and just behing 'us'.

longspider said...

So true!

Thanks for the comment, Buffy.

Anonymous said...

I really like your writings.
I'll read more tomorrow.

longspider said...

Thanks, Brian - see you around!

Elisabeth said...

Nice writing! I'm almost inspired to try it my self. But in english? Have you seen an example in norwegian?

Baro

longspider said...

Baronessen: I have not, but the template is very simple, and could easily be translated to other languages. I would like to try it once in Norwegian, actually - I'd love to see what you come up with if you try it! :)

Anonymous said...

Wow, that's a beautiful treatment of the exercise. Makes me teary. :)

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Bottom Buzzer said...

Vakkert! Føler at jeg kjenner deg mye bedre nå...

Anonymous said...

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* Crista * said...

Alldeles nydelig, Hanna. Min storebror Otto skrev en gang noe jeg aldrig kommer til å glemme. Det var etter en liten sösken krangel og lappen var en slags unnskyldning. Etter det stod dette:"Jeg elsker ord. De er så stille og rolige." Sant, sant.

Klem!

Bottom Buzzer said...

God Påske Hanulf!

Anonymous said...

Wo-hooow... Vakker poesi, sant og visst...men når man kommer fra samme sted...rörer det ganske så djupt...! Tessi babe

longspider said...

Thanks for great comments, everyone! I've been quiet for a little bit, but am back with a vengeance! :) Se y'all around...

MsT said...

how stirring and what beautiful imagery! i have been a writer all my life and am just dipping my toes into poetry. thanks for sharing and hello from michele.

longspider said...

Thanks, Dara! We have something in common: I aspire to some day become a writer, and am also just getting my toes dipped in poetry :)

Paul Nichols said...

Nice job. Like it. Thanks for stopping by my joint. I'll keep in touch.