oh gosh, so much tragedy in so few words!
Powerful, visual, striking. Good to read a darker take on the theme.
Birds and cars. Been there. Very upsetting when it happens.
Wow, so immediately visceral. Poor bird.
Ouch. Darn. Lots of feelings packed into those few words!
Life and death, just a second apart -- your haiku is perfect.
now that's a depressing haiku!
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oh gosh, so much tragedy in so few words!
Powerful, visual, striking. Good to read a darker take on the theme.
Birds and cars. Been there. Very upsetting when it happens.
Wow, so immediately visceral. Poor bird.
Ouch. Darn. Lots of feelings packed into those few words!
Life and death, just a second apart -- your haiku is perfect.
now that's a depressing haiku!
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