Feet afoot
Fiddle bow flies
Bass beats
Lighter on top
Dark behind
Rock looks black
Precipitous
Moss slick
Brook sinister
Furious
Falls forward
Full of froth
White rage
Rushes down
Sheer cliff face
Gleaming green
Forest deepens
Light shafts
Reach loftily
Out of mist
Stomping feet
Dancing torsos
Quick glance
Fiddle bow flies
Feet afoot
Sumbitted for Sunday Scribblings prompt: Dance
3 comments:
I like the rhythm in this piece
wow...great take on the prompt...
These short lines work really well here! They sound like heart beats!
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