Monday, December 31, 2007

Frost

cold, crisp ground –
across the chilly air
frost flakes dance
___

hot breath steams
bulging muscle halts –
a white horse

Submitted for One Deep Breath

6 comments:

spacedlaw said...

Nice images!
Happy New Year.

Tumblewords: said...

I love the white horse image - Nice work!

SandyCarlson said...

I love the dance and the breath juxtaposed with the stillness of the frost. God bless.
Writing in Faith

Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely images, the first haiku is so cold!

qualcosa di bello said...

you've pulled me into winter with your words!

happy new year!

Pearl said...

Like the second one. Striking image.

Happy New year.